Woah, thanks. It means a lot to me. Every other watcher I have is a friend of mine xD.
By the way, I see you got interesting poems yourself, but you should proofread. It looks neater. Also don't be obsessed with putting commas or full stops at the end of each verse. It sometimes messes up all the syntax and it is difficult to understand. Last but not least, I am not sure liquer is a word. I thought it was liquor.
I'm trying to help you. We all make mistakes, but nobody points them out, how are we gonna fix them?